Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Quote of the Day for Wednesday, 2/27

"Concentrate. Narrow down. Exclude." --Henry Miller


Peer Review Questions for Personal Narrative #2 Copy and paste the following questions and your responses into the comments section at the end of your partner's story.
  1. Explain how the writer uses the first sentence or two to grab the reader’s attention. If the opening doesn’t grab your attention, give the writer a suggestion on how to do so.
  2. What is your favorite line from the story? Why?
  3. Quote the section that contains the most vivid sensory details.
  4. What section could be improved through more detailed description including sensory details?
  5. Does the ending wrap up the story?
  6. What is clever and/or lively about the ending?

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