WOMAN VS. GORILLA {FINAL DRAFT}

It was almost the last day of 8th grade. I was probably 14 years old. I was 5'5 with braids, to think about it I look exactly the same now that Im in the 12 th grade. I had on a blue shirt and tan pants. Those were my middle school uniform colors and I hated them . Since it was almost the last day of school there was not alot of students at school, maybe twenty 8th graders. I was the quiet type so people thought I was a punk , until this incident. We were in the lunch room having lunch when Sharell started throwing food. Sharell wasnt an average 8th grader, she was a bully. She was 5'4, fat , and black as hell. People was scared of her but I wasnt gonna sit in my seat and let her throw french fries at me. Eventhough I didnt talk alot when I got mad I didnt know when to shut up. So as you would guess I started running off at the mouth. I can remember exactly what I was yelling , B watch where the f**k you throwing sh*t". I wish I would have kept my mouth closed but it was to late. I was calling her all types of fat bi**hes. All of a sudden Sharell got up and said, "What you say", slightly scared I repied,"You heard me". That was when it all was about to begin , my first fight. When she said she was going to come and slap the sh*t out of me , I told her to do it as I was getting up out of my seat. Well she wasnt a punk so she came over and handled her business. Everyone in the lunch room was yelling, excited to see a end of the year fight. Since I wasnt the type to get into trouble my teacher Ms.Williams couldnt believe her eyes. Ms.Williams was African American and slightly ghetto. Every child and teacher knew Sharell was a bully so Ms.Williams started hitting Sharell to get her to let go of me hair. It wasnt a big fight but it was fun to me. When it was over my friend Chinique ask me was I ok and I started laughing. I dont know why but maybe because I just got finish fighting a gorilla. I was expecting to be all bloody or swollen but I wasnt. When word got around to the other students no one believe them because I wasnt bleeding; but I earned my respect from the ones who witness it so I didnt care. It was kind of cool.







The opening does intrest me a little but it jumps right into a description of yourself.

I would think the narritive is about you watching a wrestling match with a gorrila and a woman looking at the title of the story.

the story is about olivia fighting a girl who is much bigger than she is and is a bully but olivia stood up and faught the girl even though she was scared.

I liked things best where oliva admitted she was a little scared and she felt she had a good reputation after the fight.

I would like to know more about what happened after that with you and the girl and if your mom was mad or not when she found out.