maybe its a good thing that it happened (final draft)

Why did this scary rememberable incident had to happen to me…………. It was just the three of us in the car my aunt my cousin and me. All day we had fun playing games going to the mall and went to pizza hut for pizza. I would never forget December 5,1999. Just coming from Pizza hut we decided to go to Kay Bee toys to see what we could buy my cousins for Christmas. As we came to the intersection to go to Kay Bee Toys, a baby blue Taurus hit my aunts Chrysler van on the side rear exactly where I was sitting. My cousin Taliah was sitting next to me but the guy in the Taurus hit us so hard her arm bashed! through the other window. This irresponsible teenager made us hit 7 other cars but no one was hurt as much as we were. As we got to the other side of the intersection to get everyone checked out I was unconscious. When I started to get up I heard my cousin screaming at the top of her lungs wanting my aunt who had a painful sore neck. The cops showed and tried to get all the cars that got hit together. We were still waiting in the car for the paramedics to come get us out of the car, and this lady from out of nowhere came up to the car and asked us did we want any tastycakes! My aunt was so mad she told the lady hell no! Does it look like my kids want tastycakes we‘ve just been in an accident. The lady was trying to act as if she was so sorry and she didn’t know that she was wrong. The paramedics gave us the okay to get out of the car and for us to get in the ambulance. We all got in the ambulance where my aunt was laying on the stretcher and me and my cousin was sitting next to her side by side. My aunt looked at me and said bailey where are your glasses I felt my face and started to cry, I didn’t even notice that my glasses weren’t on and the only thing I could think about was what was I going to tell my mom about my glasses. When we got to the hospital the detectives asked me questions on what happened at the scene with my uncle present there with me and I told them all that I remembered. I went to the bathroom and when I looked in the mirror there were nothing but scratches on my face and all I could think about was them never going away then my mouth felt a little sore and swollen so I didn’t know what to think. When I went into the room the doctors took x-rays and saw that I may have a broken jaw. I called my mom to tell her what happened so she could come get me and all I could think about was my glasses and I was scared that I was going to get in trouble. My mom explained to me that as long as I was okay that was all that she was worried about. When my mom arrived to the hospital in New Jersey to come get me she was crying but glad that I was okay. We left the hospital to go home and from that day until about 2 years ago we went to court and won the case. And on February 28, 2008 I will be collecting 25,000 thanx to the blue Taurus who s insurance went sky rocket!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1. I think the opening made me wonder what it was that happening to her that she wish would not have happen and it did interest me.
2. I think this narrative will most likely be about something tragic and scary that she wished would not have happen to her.
3. She was driving with her aunt and cousin and a car hit them. She lost her glasses and was afraid of being in trouble rather than the accident she was just in.
4. The things I liked best where…..how she was concerned about her lost glasses.
5. The things I would like to know more about where….the injuries of the other passengers or the injury of the man driving.
And why would some women asked a car full of injured people if they wanted tastycakes.